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I heard a song and a sip
of tea too strong for me,
But I took it anyway
The way bells ring
sometimes only
in the West

I’d like to think time
would wait for me in the
cloud pockets like bags
collecting mail, slow this
down slow me down
So I can feel this

My skin never dries
under the paper raincoat,
And she says, "Well at least
when its wet it can’t cut
you" but she doesn’t know
She doesn’t know that I
would love to bleed

Some colour in the
grey, some ice cream
sandwiches and peanut butter
Some light caught in the leaves
The green

I need some in me

But the paper just molds
to me and tears and makes its
way towards my feet and I’m
not sure what is worse
to be bare or to know that I
am defenseless anyway

I suppose it doesn’t matter
now

It’s always raining
with or without my paper
raincoat and all I can do

is wait
©2006-2009 ~thestrand
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July 2003

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:iconstoryunsigned:
good, mature and well thought out stream of consciousness approach. a pleasant blending of feelings, objectivity and strong lines across thoughts. It stands out from this here mediocre crowd *point vaguely at people around*

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if all else fails: [link]
:iconoriginill:
oh goodness.

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my enemy said to me, "love your enemy."
and i obeyed him and loved myself. gibran
:iconzebrazebrazebra:
This feels very...mm, lyrical. In want of music. Thoughts?

Also, 2003? Did you just recover it now, or did you have it for a while and just want to share...and is it revised since then? All of these things intrigue the Sarah!

I love the idea of a paper raincoat. :aww:
:iconthestrand:
I get that a lot with my work (lyrical). Perhaps its because I used to write with music in my head, which is kind of interesting because that doesn't happen so much now. Now it's more like my pulse.

As for the older poems being posted, I just had them in a folder in a box and I wanted to share them because the idea of them buried away somewhere seemed... callous. I decided to give them a chance to be heard, even if I am done with them at this point in my life.

And thank you. I'm not sure what made me think of it. It's just how I felt at the time.

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=TheExquisiteCorpse
~ObjetTrouve
~Spiral-Bound
:iconoriginill:
the paper raincoat kind! it's 80% goodness, 20% surprise! beautifully coherent, if my pieces are correct. but nevermind you that, just know you inspire me.

--
my enemy said to me, "love your enemy."
and i obeyed him and loved myself. gibran
:iconoriginill:
the paper raincoat kind! it's 80% goodness, 20% surprise! beautifully coherent, if my pieces are correct. but nevermind you that, just know you inspire me.

--
my enemy said to me, "love your enemy."
and i obeyed him and loved myself. gibran
:iconoriginill:
the paper raincoat kind! it's 80% goodness, 20% surprise! beautifully coherent, if my pieces are correct. but nevermind you that, just know you inspire me.

--
my enemy said to me, "love your enemy."
and i obeyed him and loved myself. gibran

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